TYWA 2020 Nomination for The Read-Worthy Prize Gloria

 

12 - A GREATER REWARD 

Owolabi Gloria Abosede lives in Osun State (17 years old). This story was slightly edited for grammatical accuracy and to better serve TGF readers. The originality of the story is 100% intact.


"Please... God, please."

Helen shut her eyes and opened them the next second. She let out a sigh. Her eyes were glued to Jenny's lips.

Just last week, she had caught Jenny formatting the flash drive containing her group assignment. She had confronted her, but Jenny had lit into her, telling her to go ahead and do her worst.

She had kept the matter to herself and had done the assignment again single-handedly. Why should she tell someone, knowing Jenny would get punished if her class teacher got to know? She had forgiven her when she apologized, but she had also been afraid... afraid of what Jenny would do next in an attempt to pull ahead of her.

Now that Jenny was with her in the principal's office, claiming to know the lying one between Tom and her, Helen's fear doubled. 

Jenny's words came in bits.

"Tom lied about Helen taking his answer script because she refused to tell him some answers. He placed his answer script on Helen's table, and asked her to give it to his girlfriend, Kate, sitting behind her."

Helen's eyes lit up. Jenny was defending her! 

Jenny dipped her hands into her pocket and brought out her phone. She hesitated at first. "Very early this morning, I was alone in the classroom preparing for the oral part of the examination, using the sound recorder application on my phone when Tom and Kate entered the classroom. Tom boasted to help Kate with his answers before he noticed my presence. I pretended not to hear what he said even though I and my sound recorder did."

Every other thing happened very fast. Tom apologized to Helen before the school, and was suspended for two weeks. He'd have to retake his examinations too.

Of course, Helen was happy after all that happened. However, she couldn't hold back the tears that cascaded down her cheeks when the least expected happened in the principal's office. Jenny apologized for her cruel act done out of jealousy once again, and when she showed appreciation for her forgiveness, Helen had to let her tears flow as much as they would as she pulled Jenny into an embrace. 

They were tears that reminded her that Jenny would have been silent about the truth if she had not forgiven her. Tears of celebrating a reward, greater than getting Jenny punished. Tears of a new friendship. Tears of joy.


Review: To say that something great could be born when forgiveness takes its full course is the truth of this inspiring work! -TGF team.


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Comments

  1. The essence of forgiveness can't be over emphasized, this is such a beautiful piece.

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  2. Forgiveness is key. It is not an easy thing to do though, but we can learn it day by day. Well done.

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  3. This is great, dear.
    Greater heights.

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  4. This is a great lesson for all that forgiveness is key.

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  5. Forgiveness is a seed and the harvest come first as peace of mind then later as a greater reward

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    1. This is very true.
      Thanks for reading and engaging!

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  6. Yeah
    Such a wonderful piece.....
    To err is human and to forgive is Divine.....
    Keep it up Glorious Gloria

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  7. This is no doubt a wonderful piece. Thumbs up!

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  8. Wow! This is great ma'am. Just keep moving ma for God has your back

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  9. My beautiful writer. Keep this up Gloria.

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  10. each time, I have learnt forgiveness is free yet with price.. That's kinda an oxymoron but the truth is, we all need to use the sweet simplicity of forgiveness' outcome to overcome the difficulty in taking the step every time.
    Gloria has emphasized this in her piece, a reminder we must all set each day of our existence.

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  11. This is top notch
    Forgiveness is the key

    Thank you for this eye opening story. Love you

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  12. It is good to forgive.
    Well done.

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  13. Such a beautiful piece, well done ooo👏👏

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  14. It is always good and nice to forgive,so that you can have peace of mind

    Great work darling...... Don't worry we are winning this 🥰

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  16. This actually a great story, and the one key in this life is forgiveness. Keep it up sis

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  17. Hmmmmn so inspiring.
    Forgiveness pays. When you forgive others you free yourself from bondage.

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  18. Obaniyi Roseline OpeyemiFriday, 06 November, 2020

    Forgiveness coz it keeps us together and d first to forgive is the strongest..........

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  19. Well done sis.

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  20. Though painful a times, forgiveness still stands as one of the greatest show of strength and maturity

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  21. Forgiveness is for ourselves not for someone else, although it is not that easy but we should learn to forgive others

    Nice one my dear sister🥰🥰🥰

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  22. Hmmmm
    Forgiveness is not an optional part but a necessary part of what it means to remain focused


    You're doing well dear 🥰

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  23. How powerful is this word 'forgiveness'! The very solid rock upon which human existence is built. Gloria, thanks for reminding us ones again how important forgiveness is in human endeavours through your thematic preoccupation.

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  24. So inspiring.. well done 💯💯

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  25. Yeah,this piece shows how complicated forgiveness can be,you not knowing whether u should go ahead and forgive or not since you don't know what the outcome is gonna be.... Its actually a sign of strength nd courage.... I can see Endowed at the very top,its definitely going places��

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  26. I love this.
    Ride on!

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  27. Forgiveness is a virtue. ✨
    Weldone Endowed! ��

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  28. This is wonderful.
    Forgiveness is a virtue and could be a gateway to greatness.

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  29. What a great lesson for all. Forgiveness cements broken relationship. Lord give us heart that forgive and forget.

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  30. Wow ! I'm greatly touched by your story. Yea, forgiveness is the key to growing and healthy relationship. More grace.

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  31. You did a great job, Weldon dear. Greater heights

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  32. This is wonderful ride on dear

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  33. To sin is human, to forgive is divine.... @ DrTade Obaniyi

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  34. Wow what a great story, forgiveness is the key to strong and lasting relationship
    keep it up

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  35. This is so amazing 🔥🔥🔥

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  36. Wow......this is really inspiring. More power to ur elbow.

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  37. Wow...this is really inspiring
    Forgiveness is divine

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  38. Good one. What a great lesson

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  39. Beautiful piece. So glad to read this

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  40. Well-done, Gloria!!

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  41. It takes a very kind hearted person to forgive someone of such crime.

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  42. By the way, Nice write-up💯💯

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  43. Forgiveness is a main virtue in people's lives. It helps people to move on or to bond stronger.

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  44. I love what you have done here dear.... forgiveness is definitely a light we must all shine for a clearer heart and path

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  45. Nice piece I must say. Thank you so much for sharing.

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  46. Nice piece,thought provoking,captivating and it's great for all ages.
    Indeed,Forgiveness isn’t approving what happened but choosing to rise above it and in return you receive untold peace and happiness.
    Welldone,more inks to your pen

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  47. One thing I have learnt about forgiveness is that it heals you. Forgiving doesn't mean endorsing the wrong done.

    Well done, Gloria.
    This is thought provoking!

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  48. A forgiving heart and countenance are good and rewarding.
    Thanks for the reminder dear. Beautiful piece 😍

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  49. Keep moving. This is an eye opener

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  50. That was a great work duh🤟🏽❤️

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  51. Nice story you've got here, Gloria.
    Keep it up.

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  52. Babe, this is wow!
    I'm proud of you. ��

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  53. How could Helen forgive Jenny?
    The holy spirit must have helped her 'cause she wouldn't have done that herself.
    Thanks for reminding me forgiveness is key, Gloria.

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  54. This is really good. Well done

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  55. This is a lovely piece. Forgiveness is a great key

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  56. While reading this, I was just saying to myself, amazing, amazing...
    No doubt, Glo, this is amazing.

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  57. Well done dearie
    Higher heights

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  58. I love your story.
    Its read-worthy

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  59. You are doing well, darling.

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  60. This is a beautiful piece of art, keep at itanyone will be doing themselves a favor if they forgive.

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  61. Forgiveness is everything,it is simple yet difficult,but it's worth doing. Kudos darling Gloria for this beautiful piece 👏

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  62. Forgiveness is very essential , we can't but forgive others if we want to live a good life

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  63. This is great and worthy of reading by all.👌👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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  64. More wisdom and understanding in Jesus name

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  65. You write well, dear

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  66. I love your story
    Keep it up, dearie.

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  67. Beautifully written.
    God bless you, daughter.

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  68. Where you forgive you free your heart from inner bondage.
    Forgiveness makes one gave a free mind.
    Learn to always forgive no matter what.
    Weldone Endowed.
    It's a nice piece.

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  69. This is a great Piece and very inspiring. Well done

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  70. This is wonderful babe. Well done

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  71. What an extremely wonderful story

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  72. Forgiveness is a key good friendship

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  73. You're very talented Ma'am. Keep.it up

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  74. Nice one Gloria, keep up the good work

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